You mean to tell me that this ....drawing...took you all night to do? Are you kidding me? The colors aren't even consistant. for, you used ink and it was done terribly, I might add.

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One day, Salazar, one day...

and ,why aren't you doing realy hands yet? Your'e a lier.

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One day, Salazar, one day...

Liar, Holly. It's "liar."

Anyway, DRAW REAL PEOPLE.
Hands are not circles.
Fingers are not circles.
Legs are not ovals.
Heads are not circles.
Feet are not circles.
Noses are not circles.
Eyes are not lines.
Eyebrows do not come off of the face.

DRAW YOUR OWN CHARACTERS.
As deep and intriguing as Mario, Luigi, Sasuke and Naruto are, they are not deep or intriguing in the least and you're not even excersizing a little bit of creativity by ripping them (and their plotlines) off.

STOP SUCKING.
Perhaps you could try your hand at shading.
No matter what style you end up doing, you MUST study real anatomy.
Colour with something that is made for colouring - pens are for lineart.

FantasticPassion is correct about anatomy, no matter what style you take you must know how to draw realism.

But anyways its still pretty cute!

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